Quoting G and Goob's momma:" Gah! My professor gave me a B on my exam paper. It was about a poem and I had to dissect the poem and ... [snip!] ... not quite sure how to change it, I thought it was really good. It brought my grade in the class to a 90% which is still an A"
I would totally revise it to try and get the better grade...
If you want I could help you out? I had to write a million of these things in English Lit, when I was considering majoring in it in university. I never did, since, you know...Getting married, 5 kids later, I just never had the time.
But I still remember a lot about it, so if you want a hand I'd be happy to help!