Do You Like This Wording?

For mine and SO's wedding invitations:

" We wish for you, our family and friends,
to share with us the tender
moment of our marriage.
We look toward a future
that holds an ever growing love.
Please join
(My Full Name)
and
(His Full Name)
As we pledge our vows
on Saturday, the sixth of April,
Two thousand and thirteen
at three o'clock in the afternoon,
Our Church
Our Church's Address
Reception immediately following
Our Reception Hall
Reception Hall Address "

I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you.

"To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage"

Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like.

Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."

really? hmmmm. i think of tender as something sweet and memorable. thank you for your opinion!

Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."

Lmfao I was going to say something similar.

I really like it all OP, except the word tender lol

Not really keep looking did you made that up? Congrats on your engagement and upcoming wedding!

Quoting WhY bOtHeR:" Not really keep looking did you made that up? Congrats on your engagement and upcoming wedding!"

no, i got it from google. poo, i really liked it!

I really dislike the tender moment part. Other than that I like it

Quoting HotMom21ERF:" For mine and SO's wedding invitations: " We wish for you, our family and friends, to share with ... [snip!] ... Our Church's Address Reception immediately following Our Reception Hall Reception Hall Address ""

I like it! If it works for you, go with it!

It's alright.. It could be better, I would keep looking OP! Congrats btw!

I like it!

Quoting Booger & Bubba's Mommy:" I don't like tender moment. It sounds like like you want them in the bedroom with you. "To share with us in the joining of our families in marriage" Sounds better to me. The rest of it I like."

Why "families"?

Quoting Buzz and Almond Joys momm:" I really dislike the tender moment part. Other than that I like it"

is there a different word besides tender that would make it sound better?

Quoting HotMom21ERF:" is there a different word besides tender that would make it sound better?"

I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well.

The harmony of love
meets with the melody of life
to create our beautiful
love song
Please join us to celebrate

Quoting Not tellin:" I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well. ... [snip!] ... as well. The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song Please join us to celebrate"

awwww cute!

Quoting Not tellin:" I found this and thought it was kind of cute. Although, I do like what you have origionally as well. ... [snip!] ... as well. The harmony of love meets with the melody of life to create our beautiful love song Please join us to celebrate"

I like how much more short this is.