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I didn't read all of that. But just curious, are you wanting to write a book just for yourself kind of thing, or to sell?.. And if it's to sell, what makes you think someone is interested in your story?.. I'm not trying to be bitchy, I'm curious to what your answer may be. I have to ask myself the same question when I want to sell my designs...

Who is your audience? I think the subject matter is interesting but your writing style seems like it may be best suited for teenagers