Quoting NataliesMommyToBe:" I have to write a persuasive essay over why women should not serve in combat and it is harder then it ... [snip!] ... men , due to physical and cultural considerations. Should there be more in there , or am I ready to go to the 2nd paragraph?"
Quoting JessieLeeAnne:" You're proofreading, right? "
Quoting Viv, Ev & Gwen ♥:" I think that's a smurffy smurfing opinion so I can't really offer any help other than to say read your ... [snip!] ... than to say read your essay several times and have a couple other people proofread it too, because your grammar is atrocious."
Quoting NataliesMommyToBe:" How is my grammar atrocious? For one I'm only a senior in high school, and for two I wasn't given a choice on topic this was given to me."And? I wrote better in middle school.
Quoting JessieLeeAnne:" They wouldnt give you a topic that you didn't agree with. "